Audience feedback (Unfinished rough cut)

Audience feedback:

  -Cinematography

·      More variety of shots.

·      More variety of angles.

·      Use an establishing shot.

·      More camera movement.

 -Mise en scene

·      Good use of costume and props.

·      Very realistic.

·      Lighting needs significant improvement.

 -Editing

·      None.

-Titles and SFX

·      Good start need improvement

  -Elements of an opening sequence

·      Enigma codes

·      Titles

·      Restricted shots

 -Appeal to audience

·      Cant relate as of yet.

-Genre convent

·      Enigma codes

·      Restricted shots

·      Urban environment

-Sound (Non diagetic/Diagetic)

·      Good use of  diagetic sounds


We plan to go out and reshoot most of the shots as they are too dark, we also plan to add more sounds and a soundtrack.